give me your opinion please

[BENrowned]

OUR END
by BENrowned
The end is near.
Cant you see?
Its coming soon.
You may run,
And you ma hide,
But in the end it will get us all.
It could be peaceful or vicious,
It could be fast or slow,
But it will come,
It will befall us all.
So don't run or hide,
Prepare for your end.
It is our fate,
For it is our death.

[Aggron]

Sounds quite good! Quick question - is the 'cant' supposed to be 'can't', or 'cant'? As a Lit student, use of punctuation can often convey a lot, such as attention to a certain part of the poem. Also, I like the connection of the title to the pronouns used in the poem. The title starts with 'our', but then the first part of the poem indicates that only one person is goung to be ended, so to speak. Lastly, you move back to 'our', which is interesting. All in all, a good poem :O

[BENrowned]

It's a "can't" and thank you i really appreciate your review.