I will not pay you unless I feel you've given my a good critiquing on anything from grammar, to plot. It can be positive critiquing too, I need to hear what people think I'm doing right. I will also not let you help if you just say you'll help than never actually offer m a single piece of criticism. I understand you never have to put reading my story over anything, but don't sign up if you have a busy life
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The basic plot sounds really stupid when I type it up, so it would be better if you just read it yourself. Send me your Gmail adresses and I will share it to you so you can critique it
This seems to be nessiccary now. If one member sticks with me through the whole thing, and offers me rock solid critiquing, I'll offer them one doni, and ten creatures of their choice from my for sale tab.