Dawn of the Desert

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Dawn of the Desert

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I actually wrote this poem for something else a few weeks ago, but it does seem a bit fitting here, so at least some people may find some enjoyment in it. As you can tell, I thoroughly enjoyed Dr. Seuss and Shel Silverstein. :P

There is a world with land so vast
That all may enter; none may pass

A world so free, with land so pure
And food aplenty, no need to store

Into this land came Hebzucht of bad breed
Who viewed this land with growing greed

"I could grow wealthy, rich and fat,"
He told himself as in comfort he sat

"I'll build a wall, then charge a fee,
So none can come without paying me."

And so he started to build his wall
A wall so thick and wide and tall

A wall the likes no one had seen
To compliment his evil scheme

And those who visited the land
Would stop and gawk and look and stand

"Who is that fool?" they asked each other
Looking around at friend and brother

"Why would he build that silly wall?"
No one could answer this question so small

For in his haste to feed his greed,
In his rush to complete the deed

He failed to notice a simple fact;
He required a fix that his evil plan lacked

The shadow cast by his growing wall
Killed all beneath; there was nothing at all!

The trees were shriveled; the rivers ran dry
Strangled from life by this new wall so high

Nothing remained when the wall was complete,
Forcing its builder to admit defeat.

Now children are warned when they're young to beware
They'll lose just like Hebzucht if they refuse to share!
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Re: Dawn of the Desert

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I like it, good point!

Silly question from me though, are you Dutch? :D
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Re: Dawn of the Desert

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caniskoppie wrote:I like it, good point!

Silly question from me though, are you Dutch? :D
No. :P But it's a valid question.
When I can't find a fitting name for a character, I pick a description for them and run it through babelfish in the appropriate collection of languages, and pick the best-sounding one.
For "pretty" names, the languages would be Italian, French, Spanish, etc.
For the "rougher" names (a bit more "manly," too :P) I use German, Dutch, or Russian (if I can find it in our alphabet, rather than their alphabet).
Then I run the name through in reverse, just to make sure that *my* intended translation is close to the main intent of the word.
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Re: Dawn of the Desert

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I like it! *begins 2 clap**falls silent when i realize im the only one doing it* XD
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