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Creatre a creature Entry(s)

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I was thinking about joining in on the fun and here I am! If your willing to give some (nice) criticism I will gladly take it, I'm making some pictures so this will be updated as soon as I draw them! Anyway have a look, tell me what's wrong so I can fix it >< Thanks.

Fuzzlys
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General:

Fuzzlys are know for there rainbow of colours and there loyatly when raised by a magi. Fuzzlys make great pets for children and partners for Magis. Although Fuzzlys are furry and soft they have the abilty to turn solid and become a sheild to deflect things or protect themselves from getting damaged.

Egg:

Strange; it looks like a ball of fuzz.

Child:

You didn't even see the egg hatch into a Fuzzly, but it grew and has gotten much bigger. You can now see a pair of eyes peeking out at you from inside all the fluff. Every time you look at it it seems to get bigger and bigger. It likes to cuddle up with you when relaxing. It's also gets very defencive when other people are around you.

Adult:

Your Fuzzly has grown so much that it now looks like a cross between a blanket and an animal. You find it hard to keep up with it as it hops around, sometimes you can see it curled up helping to take care of the hatchlings in the keep. It's still doesn't like you being around people it doesn't know, but it's willing to help out just about anyone.
Image -Egg, if possible it should be able to be found in a variety of vivid colours.
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Re: Creatre a creature Entry(s)

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I don't think human-like creatures are allowed. But good descriptions though.
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I didn't read anything about them not being allowed, but might as well give it a try I'm thinking up more things, so if there not allowed then I'll still be in the running.
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Nice descriptions but according to the Creature Suggestion List (viewtopic.php?f=21&t=10616&p=820023#p820023), Fauns are one of the rejected creatures.
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Ahh okay then >< I'll have to use my other idea.
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Good luck to you. ^^
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Ah ha! OKay new creature egg sprite is done ><
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More pictures are coming later. I'm not a very good spriter, so I have to hand draw them ><
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I think a bit more detail in your description would probably be a good idea. "It looks like a cross between a blanket and an animal" doesn't give people much to go on. What sort of animal does it most look like?
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