The first three (a short story)

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FlamestarAJ
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The first three (a short story)

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~this is a short story about my first four pets who are still at hatchling age at the moment~
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Characters:
Image: Snow, a female white winged cat. A master of calculations and research, she is considered the smartest of the four.
Image- Bone, a male Corax Raven, he loves to sleep and is very sensitive to light. He likes peanut butter
Image-Prism, a female Puvia, loves beautiful things and will spend hours gazing at fields of flowers. She also likes cake

CHAPTER ONE: The Hatching
Snow felt the cold breeze through a large crack in the eggshell. just one more click, I think, she thought to herself. The egg shook and then burst. Snow lay in the palm of a stranger. She quickly scampered away towards the other eggs, lying down beside them. A young girl with silver hair walked into FlamestarAJ's keep and scooped up a dark green egg nested in a skull. The egg cracked open revealing a frizzy little bird sitting in the skull. The girl gasped in surprise and dropped him. "OW!" The little crow complained, waving a wing at her. She rolled her eyes and stormed off. "Is that you, Bone?" Snow asked with wide eyes. "Yes." Snow pointed to the other eggs. They were nearly there too. Five minutes later, a brilliant rainbow-colored bird hatched, flying seconds after. Bone was looking at her like :cool: and she was like :sweat:. Snow was 100% sure Bone had a crush on the colorful bird. She could just tell.
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Re: The first four (a short story)

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cool cool
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Thanks
my pets all love hugs, so click on them to help them grow! <3
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I am on a few other sites, such as chickensmoothie, PetAdoptables, and Xanje. I love the communities on these VPGs and I love the people here!
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Re: The first three (a short story)

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Since this is a Magistream fanfic, I've moved it to the Den for you.

I've also removed the links from your pets (the images are still there). I realize its a story, but having live links is considered eggspam.
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Pretty ponies...
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