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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Posted: March 24th, 2024, 7:05:38 pm
by blockEdragon
These hatchlings are vain little things, and greatly enjoy human company. If left alone for two long, a bored hatchling will make a run for it, breaking into the castle and harassing everyone. Although these little hatchlings cannot run very quickly, they know full well that they are too heavy to be herded or picked up. So, they find the busiest area in the castle and lay down, oftentimes surprising magi by spraying them with water from their trunks. The easiest way to remove them is to offer them their favorite treat; watermelon. A trail of slices usually suffices to bring even the most unruly of kordaetis elephants back to their place by the lake.
The Kordaetis Elephants need a minor correction in the hatchling descriptions.

Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Posted: March 25th, 2024, 2:02:17 pm
by froglady
From the Goldfish description:
"Golfish" hatchlings are usually seen with the krakens and leviathans.

This is more of a wrong word than a misspelling:
"They are very particular to fruits, which are very difficult for them to procure." It's from the Topo Wyrm description, and I believe it's meant to say "partial to fruits" (as in having a liking for fruits) instead of "particular".

Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Posted: April 29th, 2024, 8:20:37 pm
by Altairia
The description of adult Ardulen Grotesques has ??? in place of the ':

"Keep???s", "don???t", "weren???t"
bestiary/1101

Attune to an element quest:

Compound words? "easy going", "single mindedness", "hard hearted"
Unnecessary capitalization: "Bright and Happy", "Caring and Healing"