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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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hi rosehill and team, this is quite minor but i was reading the prism fox description:

"They are incredibly useful to pick out young magi who may not where their strengths lie."

it appears there should be a "know" between "not" and "where," although i suppose it could be another word as well.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Bestiary wrote:Spider Light, https://magistream.com/bestiary/708
Notes:
The Spider Light changes colors every 15 minutes.
Sprite rotates every 20 minutes.
So... 15 or 20 minutes?
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also quite minor, but in the records for breeding, whenever a pair is unsuccessful, it currently has a typo and reads "Unsuccessfull".
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Small typo, found in the Western Desgolo bestiary entry: "This ability, however, cab be used to clear fields and small forests of the desgolos as well".

Also, the Donec Fish bestiary entry: "In the wild, these practices are to insure the survival of the group...". It should be "ensure", which is used correctly within the next few sentences of the typo.

And the page for Whitestone Crag : "Among the scholars and magi, another legend persists -one unrelated to diamonds." It should be "persists — one".
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On the bestiary page for the Cupric Jellycap: "Like other fungi, they're detrivores, feeding primarily on dead, rotting materials from inside the cave." It should be "detritivores". :P
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Bestiary page for Assassin Bird,
the Keep does not ban their breeding outsize of Tetzcotal
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Creature 1485: Spring Kuei

The text "When there is nothing else left to paint, the spring kuei will start working on buildings. If a wall is blank today, tomorrow it could be covered in strange, yet colorful shapes. Not everyone is happy to have their house colored in permanent ink by strange beetles, let alone the walls of the Keep." is twice in the description of the adult (last few sentences).
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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creature/14858625

In the description for the adult torveus dragon
Luckily, turveus dragons recover quite quickly
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Nightcrawler/Daycrawler, bestiary/338 and bestiary/337, general description:
Bestiary wrote:Nightcrawlers/Daycrawlers are always kind enough [to] paralyze their victims before consuming them, though.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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The new creature: Cecimirs Delfino

Says "barely the side of a common dog" in the creature description.
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