also-- where beautiful purple fish lived. The soon grew large and --should be They sorry to be such a stickler for spelling...old habits die hard 
The creation of the World
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Re: The creation of the World
Love it love it..One thing thou...a typo....black wild horses the thundered --should be "that thundered" also-- where beautiful purple fish lived. The soon grew large and --should be They sorry to be such a stickler for spelling...old habits die hard
also-- where beautiful purple fish lived. The soon grew large and --should be They sorry to be such a stickler for spelling...old habits die hard 
Either way we love them, and that cannot be changed, but we must not sentence ourselves to stumble in the darkness with them.