Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More

Anti-Love Poem
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Zeteri
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Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More

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Love, lilacs, lilies and more
all come to together to make love roar
along with a tree to make people sing
let this potion go
when it goes
the love will cease
and it will be no more


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Re: Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More

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Can someone please give me their opinion on my poem so I can maybe make it better
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Re: Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More

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I like it! I think it's fine as-is.
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