MagiStream

Bad grammar has always bothered me a little, though it's different for each situation. Incorrect use of there, they're and their or you're and your is a biggie. Capitalization and punctuation I don't mind as much. I can read shorthand (plz, imo, ur, etc.) fairly fluently, but a lot of the time when ...

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Actor

The bright feeling wasn't very well shown through because the wings and body clash. The dark green and the bright orange just don't sit well together and since you don't want to change the body, maybe try lightening or changing the wing color altogether. I think a light gold color instead would work...

I'm willing to try, though animals aren't my specialty.

Also took a look at your profile, do you still want a drawing of your three characters Smarsh, Morrill and Zimmy? I could try that too if you wanted me to

Hermione~!

Llamas eat grass with spoons and sporks that seem very strange. Also, they punch someone in the face with wet sponges. They also like to steal monkey's tools because they can make wooden swords to kill each other with. Aiden is one of them. He is a really unusual because his pie tastes like socks di...

Exquisite

Everyone knows kittens are zombie killing machines.

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