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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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boundin wrote:In the description for the keeatl, they're almost constantly referred to as xericoatls, e.g. in the adult description: "Xericoatls are so-named for their love of hot, dry climates."
I believe this is the "Species name" for all the Parrot coatls. This is the description for both the Keeatl and Weiroatl, as well as their Doni equivalents. Though, I wouldn't mind seeing it being changed- because it definitely confused me when I first read it! :lol:
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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In the creature release news, the Wallatrice sprite is made by Xenomorph/Lazuli but on the creature page, only Xenomorph is mentioned.

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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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PrincessOfVampires wrote:In the creature release news, the Wallatrice sprite is made by Xenomorph/Lazuli but on the creature page, only Xenomorph is mentioned.
Lazuli collaborated with Xenomorph on the adult Wallatrices, and is thus listed as an artis on the adult's page, but not listed on egg or hatcling stage creature's page. :italian:
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Found a missing word on the Jax #623 entry, under hatchling:

"Due to their weak eyesight, they have be supervised around smaller creatures because they're prone to mistaking someone's pet for food and lunging suddenly."

It should, I think read:

"Due to their weak eyesight, they have to be supervised around smaller creatures because they're prone to mistaking someone's pet for food and lunging suddenly."
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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The release date of the Ocellata Amagnae on its bestiary page is listed as October 26, but I think it should be November 26 :roll:
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Kitsune description seems to have a typo? :o

Stealth and quiet, kitsune are able to explore without being noticed, sneaking into dangerous territories with ease.

Should say this, right?
Stealthy and quiet, kitsune are able to explore without being noticed, sneaking into dangerous territories with ease.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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From the Bootherium page:
The musk oxen of the north are known to wander far in their search for shelter, but it wasn???t until magi began to follow them on their annual migrations that they discovered the far-reaching powers these creatures possess.
I think those question marks should just be an apostrophe. Does it look like this for anyone else or just me?

ETA: The Ovibos page, for some reason, looks fine, even though it says the same thing.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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I found a few missing release dates on beastiary while I was sorting my creatures by their month of release in my keep. Kraken and Fire Gryphon appear to be missing their release dates although most of the early released creatures have their dates listed these two appear to missing them. Even if the exact date isn't known, shouldn't the month the creature was released be on bestiary page? :derp:

Honestly I am not sure if a lack of listed release date is considered a typo or not but I wasn't sure where to mention it.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Most of the earliest creatures don't have their release date listed in the bestiary yet. They'll be added eventually, though that's something that's been quite low on the priority list recently. :italian:
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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From the Tenabre Fox page:
Tenabre kits are some of the most unscrupulous and naughty of companions, and must be trained very well unless they run rampant.
I think the word "unless" should be changed to "lest".
Tenabre kits are some of the most unscrupulous and naughty of companions, and must be trained very well lest they run rampant.
"Unless" here means "except in the case that they run rampant", whereas "lest" here means "so that they do not run rampant" or "for fear that they run rampant".
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