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Re: Journey Into Alasre Moutains
Posted: December 21st, 2023, 5:56:27 am
by audrei9
MothballMilkshake wrote: ↑December 21st, 2023, 1:19:13 am
audrei9 wrote: ↑December 20th, 2023, 7:53:41 am
Aight. Just one little thing-
you said that Alethin's phoenix was a cardinal phoenix, but that phoenix hurt him? Cardinal phoenixes are supposed to be pushy healers right? Did you forget that you were writing a cardinal phoenix halfway through lol
I'm not finding a passage where the phoenix hurt him, unless I am having a complete mental blank?
"You didn’t bring a phoenix?” Alethin asked his old sometimes friend. Talyn winced and held out his cloak, showing off an array of burn marks as he did so.
Re: Journey Into Alasre Moutains
Posted: December 21st, 2023, 6:02:11 am
by MothballMilkshake
audrei9 wrote: ↑December 21st, 2023, 5:56:27 am
MothballMilkshake wrote: ↑December 21st, 2023, 1:19:13 am
audrei9 wrote: ↑December 20th, 2023, 7:53:41 am
Aight. Just one little thing-
you said that Alethin's phoenix was a cardinal phoenix, but that phoenix hurt him? Cardinal phoenixes are supposed to be pushy healers right? Did you forget that you were writing a cardinal phoenix halfway through lol
I'm not finding a passage where the phoenix hurt him, unless I am having a complete mental blank?
"You didn’t bring a phoenix?” Alethin asked his old sometimes friend. Talyn winced and held out his cloak, showing off an array of burn marks as he did so.
Yes, Talyn didn't bring a phoenix, he brought a Galopin's Flaming Comet and it hatched and burnt him
Re: Journey Into Alasre Moutains
Posted: December 21st, 2023, 6:04:26 am
by audrei9
oh my god was I sleepwalking when I read that sorry